The lift
Posted by manuscrypts | Posted in 55, Attempted Humour, Stories | Posted on 13-03-2009
Tags: car, fiction, lift, pickup line, wordplay
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He’d never tried it. But circumstances were such that he really had no alternative. He was stuck at a party that was ending, and he didn’t have a cab. He didn’t know the hosts well enough. Hers was the last car to leave. He would attempt a pick up line, just so he’d get dropped.
until next time, careening character
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walk!
e would attempt a pick up line, just so he’d get dropped.
nice wordplay
Neat!
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That was neat !! Quite neat indeed !
nice, very nice…the play on the words, i mean
did it work? i mean the lines?
austere: distance?
kunal: thats the whole idea
thanks rads
thanks indeed kavi
suma:
arunima: haha, don’t know…why don’t you carry the story forward?
hey cynic